This blog is a record of my learning during the years I was at Pt England School through to Tamaki College.
Friday, 26 February 2016
How Much is it?
Here is a Presentation that my Maths Group, Triangle has been working on this is about making the amount of money. What I,v learned from this was to make that amount of money and how to use it. Please enjoy my presentation leave a comment and enjoy.
Wednesday, 24 February 2016
Re-Crafting
Hello there, Me and my Literacy class, Room 5 has been working on Re-crafting, Re-Crafting means changing the story to our own words and making sure it has good details and also making sure it is interesting for the reader.
Thursday, 18 February 2016
Narrative Writing 2
Here my 2nd Narrative writing that I have been working on in Literacy class. This is about a brother and a sister who hates the dark, mirrors and hates staying home by themselves I hope you enjoy and please leave a comment thank you.
Who-Jasmine and Twist
What-Jasmine and Twist are Brothers and sisters they are scared of the Dark the ghost and they are also scared staying home by themselves.
When- On a Dark night
Where- At home Thursday Night
Character Description.
Jasmine has nice long hair, she loves reading, her favorite book is Diary of the wimpy kid and she hates scary things such as darkness, ghost and mirrors.
Twist loves dancing he loves playing sports, his favorite thing to do mostly at home is to do art and to listen to music on his phone. What twist hates is basically the same thing Jasmine hates ghost, mirrors, darkness and staying home alone.
As Jasmine looked behind her something began to move…
she saw the shadow glide past her, she was standing in the living room to check if anyone was there but it was no one. Jasmine felt little tiny wind touching her skin she was totally freaked out it was like someone’s head is right behind her neck. So Jasmine straightaway ran to her brother Twist and said someone is in the living room.
They both ran into the room and something has changed the couch was facing the window it was like someone or something is out the window watching us. They saw someone heading to the room Jasmine and Twist saw hair track “Wow this is freaky” said twist they both followed the hair track and it was leading them to the closet.
“let's take a deep breath” said twist they both opened the closet door and screamed “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” jasmine screamed so so loud that the next door neighbor had to shut their windows. “Oh it’s just mum messing around with us” said twist. “Few” said Jasmine they both thought it was a real ghost girl, So while Jasmine and twist was watching t.v we couldn't stop hearing mum laughing so wait was it really mum? said Jasmine.
Narrative Writing.
Hello there, here is a Narrative writing that I have writ in for the past 2 weeks. This is about 2 survivors who were best friends and who went out camping with there family but unfortunately they were camping near a volcano that was about to erupt. Sorry I better leave the rest to you guys to read I hope you enjoy and please leave me a comment.
The Two Survivors
Once upon a time in a spooky forest there lived a girl named Tina and her best friend Becca. They've been living in the forest for 2 years already, I don’t even know what happened at the start but they went out camping with their family and where they stay is where the volcano is.
They only slept at the forest for only 2 days but because they had to leave early there was smoke coming out of the volcano it looked like is was going to erupt. They packed their camping stuff and head to the car they didn’t have time to put on their shoes so they rushed to the car. While they were running they ran into little puddles that were boiling hot. “Ouch” said Tina “These puddles of water are boiling hot” said tina.
They both fell at the same time and there was two tunnels. They didn’t know which way their family went, Tina guessed the one on the left and Becca guessed the one on the right “Come on pick already” yelled Becca from the back. The Volcano started bursting into flames, lava started coming down slowly. Their family went to the right but unfortunately Becca and Tina went the wrong way both of them went to the tunnel where it leads to nowhere.
Just then Tina and Becca heard the car start they didn’t want to run out because they were scared that they are going to get hit so they both stayed there until the eruption ends. So after a few hours Tina couldn’t stop crying and Becca can not believe that there parents are gone they won’t find them ever again.
After when that story happened Becca and Tina went out to look for some wild berries, while they were looking Tina heard noises coming from the back of the bush “Shhhhhh” said Becca. They both walked towards the bush and pulled it apart. Becca and Tina was so surprised it was people they were so relieved
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