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Wednesday 24 August 2016

Cross Country (Show not Tell)

Start:
Before the race has started my heart was pounding, I clenched my fist vigorously.


Middle:
It was time for the 2nd lap sweat was dripping down my face like a waterfall. I was bursting into flames, my head was burning hot, It felt like my head was about to smoke fire.


End:

I was relieved to see the finish line in sight, I heard the crowd yelling their lungs out. I passed through the finish line with excitement.

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