Thursday, 9 June 2016

Story Writing

As Jasmine looked behind her something began to move…
she saw the shadow glide past her, she was standing in the living room to check if anyone was there but it was no one. Jasmine felt little tiny wind touching her skin she was totally freaked out it was like someone’s head is right behind her neck. So Jasmine straightaway ran to her brother Twist and said “someone is in the living room”.

They both ran into the room and something has changed the couch was facing the window it was like someone or something is out the window watching us. They saw someone heading to the room Jasmine and Twist saw hair tracks “Wow this is freaky” said twist they both followed the hair and it was leading them to the closet.

“let's take a deep breath” said twist they both opened the closet door and screamed “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” jasmine screamed so so loud that the next door neighbour had to shut their windows. Twist wouldn’t open his eyes so as Jasmine. After it was just there me messing around with them. They went back to the living room and there me keeps laughing at them next time said Twist we will pick on her.

So later on that night Jasmine would always think if that was really her mum ………….

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