On Wednesday room 13 went down to the field to do triathlon. When we started to do triathlon we were with room 14. When we started we had an instructor and there were 3 events. Swimming,running and cycling. when we started we have to go to swimming first and when we did swimming it was only me ashley and jessica that was doing swimming. Then the rest of the room 13 girls had to do star jumps and i thought that we have to do swimming but it was actually a water slide and it was so cool because after sliding we did cycling when we did cycling we had to go put on our helmets on so we can be safe and we had to go around the cones and around the flags when we finish cycling we have to take of my helmet and drop of the bike and then we have to do running and when we finish running we have to sit down and wait for the other team to finish.
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Hi Rowana,
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