Hey boggers,
As you can see here is a doc that I have been working on. This is about rewriting the paragraph and making it better than the other. On the left is the sentences that I have to rewrite on the right is the sentences that I have changed and made it a better one. Please leave a comment and enjoy.
Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.
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Pick up an egg and gently hit it on the side of the bowl, than empty the contents into the bowl.
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Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.
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Open the fridge and get out the butter, than you take off the lid and you get a knife and scoop out some butter. Than rub the knife onto the toast.
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Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.
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Hold two shortest side of the paper and bend them together, then fold it so that the paper is now in half.
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When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.
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Once you hear the sound of the whistle, move your right leg in front of your left as fast as you can.
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When player One had rolled the die, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.
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After when the first player rolls the dice they should hand it over to the second player who should roll it too. How ever you keep playing the game until you have found the player who made it to the end or the player who has the most points.
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If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.
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If you are wanting to turn on your computer, look around at the back of your device and you will see a button and press it once.
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Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.
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Hold the handles of the scissors and cut through the dotted line, be safe around scissors and make sure you don’t hurt yourself.
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Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
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Before you start mixing all the ingredients switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
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Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.
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Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, be careful and make sure you don’t get any glue on your clothes.
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When you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight.
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Once you have planted your seed pick up the pot and move it a side near a window, where it will get plenty of sunshine.
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