Rewriting

Hey boggers,

As you can see here is a doc that I have been working on. This is about rewriting the paragraph and making it better than the other. On the left is the sentences that I have to rewrite on the right is the sentences that I have changed and made it a better one. Please leave a comment and enjoy.

Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.	Pick up an egg and gently hit it on the side of the bowl, than empty the contents into the bowl.
Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.	Open the fridge and get out the butter, than you take off the lid and you get a knife and scoop out some butter. Than rub the knife onto the toast.
Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.	Hold two shortest side of the paper and bend them together, then fold it so that the paper is now in half.
When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.	Once you hear the sound of the whistle, move your right leg in front of your left as fast as you can.
When player One had rolled the die, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.	After when the first player rolls the dice they should hand it over to the second player who should roll it too. How ever you keep playing the game until you have found the player who made it to the end or the player who has the most points.
If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.	If you are wanting to turn on your computer, look around at the back of your device and you will see a button and press it once.
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.	Hold the handles of the scissors and cut through the dotted line, be safe around scissors and make sure you don’t hurt yourself.
Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.	Before you start mixing all the ingredients switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.	Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, be careful and make sure you don’t get any glue on your clothes.
When you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight.	Once you have planted your seed pick up the pot and move it a side near a window, where it will get plenty of sunshine.

Make Kindness Go Viral

During the holidays I have done heaps of things such as Camp, Mostly helping, cleaning, going shopping and more. Also during the holidays I helped my nana with the groceries shopping, I helped my dad with looking after my sibling and also helping out cleaning the bed rooms. What can you make kindness go viral? Well you can do heaps of things to make kindness go viral like helping people out and also using your manners where ever you go. 


This week I have been helping my nana I think I have put a smile on her face because lately she calls me her babysitter which is quite funny to me. In the holidays I prefer watching T.V and playing on my phone but sometimes you just gotta stand up and help around with your parents don't ask them if they need help, because obviously they will tell you to sit back down and do your own thing maybe just get us and help them without telling them if they need help. 


Right now I am over at my nana's soon I will help her make dinner and I know in her head she will think I am really helpful. In the past when my Aunt was taking us to the movies, I would always have a talk with mum and she would always tell me to use my manners and to always help out, because when you do people will think that your parents has taught you good manners.


Also if you have nothing to do at home just look up DIY'S on you tube and it has really fun things that you could draw or create. I hope you enjoy my writing about making kindness go viral maybe you can try it. Please leave a comment :) Thank you 

Fia Fia

Last Night was one of the BEST night's I have ever had in my life because Pt England School had there own Fia Fia performances. Fia Fia is about representing our culture's, Showing our Whanau what we have been learning for the past few weeks and also enjoying our time dancing with our friends and family. Me and my Siblings had fun performing on stage.  Before we got on stage Jordan one of our MC's introduced our group. I felt nervous because my whole family was here to watch but 1 special family member wasn't able to watch me in person and that special person was my MUM, It was sad for me but I know that she was watching me and my siblings from above and I know she would be proud of us as always.

It was time we all went up on stage and all I could hear was "GO Rowana, Go Raewen." I had tears falling out, i didn't want to wipe it. We were all lined up and still the Crowd went Wild. "Woo Hoo" there it goes the song has started and we start swaying left to right. I was so proud of myself I start dancing and as soon as we turn around to the crowd I could see my Aunt, Dad and Nan walking up to the Donation Box and handing there money over. I saw my dad walking up to the box and I saw tears coming down his face, I was sad I just wanted to get off stage and start hugging him. The Dance has finished we bow to the crowd and again they were cheering for us. 

We got off stage and went to go and sit down. We stayed and watched the rest of the dance groups. This Fia Fia 2016 was the best, it was the last Fia Fia because next year I am off to college. I enjoyed performing on stage and I also enjoy watching my Friends and family on stage. My Favorite dance group has to be the Tongan Boys and the Junior Hip Hop team yr 1 to 4 because they danced as a Team and they danced with Faith.