Persuasive argument.

Here is a Persuasive argument that i did in class please enjoy and please leave me a comment. In my opinion we shouldn’t have school on Monday to Thursday because if Friday is part of the weekends then we won’t be able to learn much.If we have school on Monday to Friday then kids will know better at stuff like maths reading and writing.School is for learning and thats why it is for learning not for people who be silly or playing around.Children need to learn and read a lot and the more the teachers teach kids the more they will get paid and kids will get better at doing the things that the teachers told them. Teachers need to teach kids so that they know what to do. Kids wants to play with their friends at school but it is not the right time to play during work time it is the time to work and focus a lot with your teacher.Children need more learning from the teachers ,because children that are year 5 should be in stage 6.In school your class should be quite because if the other class is working and trying to do ther work you might disturbe them. Kids should go to school from Monday to Friday because kids need to and they need to cragrat and maybe go to work get paid all the time.Kids need to learn because when they grow up they will go to college and they will start to learn better from their old school.Last but not least kids should go to school because when you read with a teacher you had to go home with a book that you read with your teacher take it home and read it to your mum or dad and once you finished you need to retell the story.