Thursday, 19 June 2014

My Hot Summers Day.

Hello here is a sentence we did in class it is about Hot Summers Day.I hope you ENJOY and please leave me a comment.

 It was a very hot Summer’s day. I walked out of my house and stood on the footpath. My feet were burning hot. It felt like I was standing on Lava. As I was running to the Beach the burning got worse. I ran and hopped in the water. My feet were cooling down and my body was calmed.


1 comment:

  1. I love what you have written Rowana. Is this a sentence or a paragraph? Why?