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Thursday 4 September 2014

My Samoan Narrative Writing.

Once upon a time 4 people  traveled to Samoa.they went to stay there for a month because they wanted to visit people and to have fun in the holidays.The 4 people was Ashley, Rowana, Elizabeth and Taunese.  Ashley was the mean and the bossy one of all, Elizabeth is a nerd and smart, Rowana is fun and girly and Taunese is stupid and doesn't know how to sing ABC.

On their first day in Samoa they went off going for a bike ride. Elizabeth went for a bike ride by herself because she thinks that she could look after her own self.She went for a ride at the rocky cliff. She nearly fell but she was holding on to her bike and her bike was holding on to the tree. Elizabeth tried to get up because her hands were too sweaty, so she tried pulling herself up and she couldn't so she let go of the handle of the bike and rolled down like a ball, down she went. “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh as Elizabeth was rolling down” she was so scared that she might fall on a hard concrete and hurt herself. But lucky she landed on the soft sand at the beach.


When Elizabeth landed on the soft sand she got up and said “Where am I, what happened.” “Oh that’s right I fell off the cliff and started rolling down.” Elizabeth couldn't walk she tried getting up but she couldn’t so she crawled all the way back to where we live.As Elizabeth got home Ashley came up to her and said “Eww why are you here” “I fell off a cliff” said Elizabeth. “Well you better go and wash your body off or else you will STINK for ever Hahahaha HA”. Elizabeth felt sad and said to herself “Do I really smell” and she sniffed her T-shirt and it really does smells.


On their last day they went to the beach. Taunese said “ Can I go for a swim” and Rowana said “Sure go ahead” and so Taunese jumped in the water with some excitement and started splashing the water. “SPLASH SPLASH SPLASH!” said Taunese. As Rowana, Elizabeth and Ashley was watching Taunese swim they all started jumping in the sea because they wanted to have fun. While they were having a swim Ashley the mean one was starting to get nicer and nicer because she felt sad from all the things that she said to the others. So Ashley went to have fun with them and said “I am so sorry for what I did and for calling you guys names, do you forgive me” and Taunese said “Yes we do” now lets go and have some FUN!! said Rowana.


So they went back to NZ.They had lots and lots of Fun in Samoa. Hey I got a Question have you ever been to Samoa?. Leave a comment if you have, and tell me what you did over there.











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